I think you do a great job of speaking emphatically and clearly. Your context and significance are really clear, as well. I would like to here more about why it's important to see how these three factors relate to each other as well as why these are the main factors to investigate.
I also wish you would have used some visual aids, perhaps, to exemplify what you were saying about the game. I'm certain that you'll include them in your final presentation, but I do think it was jazz it up a bit.
Hey Max! Great job! I think your video shows that you really know a lot about your topic, so you're in a really good place. I don't know if you needed to explain the rules of blackjack in the video, but it was helpful, so that's not a real complaint. I also think you don't address the value of your research enough. You've talked about how it can be used to help people with gambling addictions since it shows how they are manipulated/how they think, so be sure to emphasize that somewhere in your project. Other than that, great work!
Hey Max! The context around your research is really clear, the gap is really clear, and your methods are really clear also, so good job! Also it’s really great how you don’t need a script to fully explain your research project and you can just go through it because you know it so well, so that says a lot. I think you probably should have explained the significance some more at the end (you probably just ran out of time or something), but you could have tied it to like humanity or human nature in general? Like we like to be impulsive or something? Idk? But your research sounds really interesting, and I’ve played blackjack before and I’ve experienced all of things you talked about in your research, so I look forward to seeing what you find!!
I think you do a great job of speaking emphatically and clearly. Your context and significance are really clear, as well. I would like to here more about why it's important to see how these three factors relate to each other as well as why these are the main factors to investigate.
ReplyDeleteI also wish you would have used some visual aids, perhaps, to exemplify what you were saying about the game. I'm certain that you'll include them in your final presentation, but I do think it was jazz it up a bit.
Hey Max!
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I think your video shows that you really know a lot about your topic, so you're in a really good place. I don't know if you needed to explain the rules of blackjack in the video, but it was helpful, so that's not a real complaint. I also think you don't address the value of your research enough. You've talked about how it can be used to help people with gambling addictions since it shows how they are manipulated/how they think, so be sure to emphasize that somewhere in your project. Other than that, great work!
ReplyDeleteHey Max!
The context around your research is really clear, the gap is really clear, and your methods are really clear also, so good job! Also it’s really great how you don’t need a script to fully explain your research project and you can just go through it because you know it so well, so that says a lot. I think you probably should have explained the significance some more at the end (you probably just ran out of time or something), but you could have tied it to like humanity or human nature in general? Like we like to be impulsive or something? Idk? But your research sounds really interesting, and I’ve played blackjack before and I’ve experienced all of things you talked about in your research, so I look forward to seeing what you find!!